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Excerpt from The Canvas (My Novel)

Postby Daz » Apr 08, '14, 4:30 pm

Right, should probably provide a little context. The Canvas is set in the late 70's and early 80's. This scene I believe takes place in 1980, about 6 months into the main characters wrestling career. Kayfabe is very much alive and not even his family (his brother Shane, sister Connie and mother Constance) is aware that wrestling is a work ...

Remember, I'm no Londonite.

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Re: Excerpt from The Canvas (My Novel)

Postby Viazon » Apr 08, '14, 4:40 pm

Too long. Didn't read. 1/10.
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Postby The Legend » Apr 08, '14, 4:42 pm

Very good work my man. Love your descriptive ability.
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Re: Excerpt from The Canvas (My Novel)

Postby SortaCreative » Apr 08, '14, 4:43 pm

Really strong excerpt. Very well written man. Interested in the full feature.
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Re: Excerpt from The Canvas (My Novel)

Postby SKS » Apr 08, '14, 4:51 pm

That was an interesting concept for a novel, I like it. Very descriptive, and emotional.
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