PCW Onslaught Episode 13 RESULTS!

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Magnum picking Gryphon to fight Omega was a stroke of genius. My ears and eyes perked up upon reading that wondering what might happen. Given the somewhat volatile tempers of both those guys, they could easily get pissed and beat the hell out of each other. Omega picking Foster was a wise choice as well; I mean you can’t go wrong with the champ!

Those wacky Mega Superpowers!!

Hmmm. Ace getting therapy, well this can only be for his own good! The idea of a multiple personality character could be really intriguing, that’s not something that’s been explored too often and has plenty of possibilities.

Hope people enjoyed Bishop vs Evans, not very often I get to write a match by myself between two of my own characters lol.

Cryin’ Orion, that’s GOLD!! Looks like Reece is pretty confident! Maybe too confident . “Bitch-up”, hmm, don’t like that as much as Cryin’ Orion. I think John should switch which one he uses more, just my opinion.

Barring Daz from the building, what kind of crap is that BoD!? The fact they sent Hypeman to keep him out is hysterical too. If this were WWE I’d expect to see Daz again before the night is through, and I suspect we might see that here too…..

A PCW wedding!??? Count me in!! …. Actually I’m interested to see what happens with the wedding, as the history of wrestling weddings is not a good one. We’ll see if these two get to have their happily ever after.

Dammmmmmn son!! Shit is getting real between Evans and Logan now! Tim did an awesome job with his half of this and the brawl. I literally am jacked up to write this match after reading that segment, bring on Genocide!

The handicap match was well done, the Zanetti’s look like total assholes doing anything to win and inflict serious punishment, and Kyle looks like the valiant hero fighting against all odds. Good to see The Comeau’s make the save as well, should be some good tag team action to come out of this too.

Bernard rolling in style as usual. Mcfaggets? Not sure that was necessary, doesn’t PCW have any sort of standards and practices? Dan Morrison returns?? Talk about a blast from the past! Haven’t even thought of that name in ages, not exactly a name you think of right away from WCSF history .

More Ace!! What the hell? Bizarre stuff, yet I’m strangely fascinated. So Ace is now repressed into the mind of himself, and “NPT” is the psycho who hurts people? Now I need a shrink…. I want to see where this leads though.

Poor Superpowers both got to taste Miller’s rage. Ha! Daz did show up, I knew it! I can’t wait to see Daz get his hands on Miller. I want to see Daz get back into the win column. I understand wanting to help get other guys over, but dammit he’s Daz, he kicks people’s asses! What’s this, Daz going off on security, wow, he’s using the full arsenal on these fools. I QUIT!! Damn straight, take all my money PCW!!

NRC vs The J-Team should be a solid tag title match at the PPV. Some good lines in here , “Polyester Princesses”, “Melissa couldn’t work the corner”, them’s fighting words!

Hmmm. Wonder what this ‘DOOM” Clock is all about.


Omega and his protégé with a good little match here. I got to say I’m surprised to see Gryphon pick up the win, I would have expected the veteran to grab this one going into Genocide, but I suppose Richard needed the win more to help establish himself further.

Zaid his usual douchebag self here. Good stuff as usual.

Sears puts up a valiant effort but can’t beat both Disciples in one night. I actually like this booking decision, and not just because I wanted to find out what the damn secret was, *coughBaitandSwitchcough*. I just like that a pretty good tag team didn’t look like chumps against one man. Whatever the secret was, Onyx Jaden didn’t seem pleased.

Kyle’s hanging by a thread with his sanity, I’m not sure Valentino and Gia helped either.

Damn good main event between Foster and Magnum, with two writers of the quality of Tim and Nick I’d expect nothing less. These two slugged it out big time; I liked them battering each other with punches and both guys smiling throughout. Kaiser gets involved at the end and uses the always dangerous brass knucks. Good to see both Magnum and Gryphon getting pretty big wins on this show.

Kaiser brutalizes Foster with the ladder setting up an interesting story for Genocide and Jailbreak.

Great show again, Genocide should be off the charts. Seriously, Jailbreak with Foster and Kaiser, I Quit with Daz and Miller, Magnum vs Omega, Evans vs Logan, and all the other matches, it’s gonna be amazing.

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Pick Your Poison – Omega chooses Foster for Magnum's opponent which I guess Omega wasn't expecting that kind of reaction from Phillips who's just nonchalant about having Foster for his opponent. Phillips was able to hurt him more with choosing his friend Gryphon for Omega's opponent so he really was able to get some sort of revenge for being put through a table last week. Don't think there is any opponent that can get under Magnum's skin because he isn't connected to anyone or has any friends or allies.

13 – “He's not a real assassin. He's from Kansas.” That was funny. The Master is clearly delusional if he thinks that on any other episode he would be the clear favorite to win over Miller. The bag of luck was cute.

Ace's Psycho Analysis Pt 1 & 2 – So Ace possibly has D.I.D. Or borderline DPD and has another personality NPT which we don't know what it stands for yet. I have to see where this story is going, as it can still be a hit or miss.

Evans vs Bishop – This was a good match and I did like the reference to Shane having to deal with the taller and stronger Bishop which showed in the match. It's things like this that can really make a match and characters stand out, especially knowing what your characters limitations are. I really enjoyed reading this match because of that, really showed Bishop's power and what a threat he's gonna be in PCW. Of course Andrew had to come and ruin it nice going Logan. Andrew is so manipulative and love playing mind games which he's shown to be very good at. Match was good, so I see a good feud between Evans and Bishop in the future.

Daredevil's Due – Reece reminds me of a coherent Jeff Hardy with all the stunts and whatnot while letting Bishop know that they have a match for Genocide.

Rose Rejected – Hmmm wondering if Miller had a hand in Daz being banned from the building? Poor Hypeman, Daz might end up hurting him one day. Poor Evelyn too she can't get Daz under control or hardly get any words in otherwise which possibly won't put Daz in the best of light when you think about their relationship.

Sealing the Deal – Awww Valentino proposing to Gia, so romantic, will it be a happy ending? We all know how wrestling engagements/weddings go. Nice little dig there about Dylan's true love prevailing.

Menace to Society – I guess Desmond is a hot button issue for Logan. Shane is only saying what I've been thinking about Logan and his “seen the light” act. Alexa too, she's acting a little too innocent for her own good. Shane might be the one that might actually expose this act.

Kyle vs Zanetti Family – Love the handicap graphic, nice touch. What I wanted to do in this match was have Dylan's offense mostly be heavily relied on by counter moves more than having a big bunch of offense since he's taking on two people. Hopefully everyone liked the match and got a sneak peek of how The Family go about doing their tag team matches by communicating in Italian and Mikaleh giving signals letting Renzo and Roxanne know what they have to do as he plans everything ahead of time while still Roxanne as the evilest woman that ever eviled.

Rolling in Style – I didn't like the Mcfaggets remark all that much, it's a little too offensive. Bernard is gonna bring Dan Morrison in as his manager. Well have to see how well these two work with each other and if Morrison will cut corners to make Bernard have advantages in matches, get #1 contender matches, and title shots, etc. Since Bernard is rich we'll see if he'll put his money to use.

Miller vs Master – We all pretty much figured how this match was gonna go. Guess the bag o' lucky charms just didn't have any type of magic at all. Daz being able to get past security and try to attack Miller. I'm wondering what type of role Evelyn is going to play here? Wondering if she's gonna be the supportive girlfriend? Is she gonna have more of an active role while being with Daz?

War of Attrition – Looks more to me that Evelyn can't control her man. Girl better speak up since she seem to not want Daz to be in the I Quit match at Genocide. Daz doesn't seem to care what she has to say or her feelings. Interesting to hear Daz is waiving all liability just so he can go at Miller, which shows that he's about to just go over the edge.

Gunning for Gold – Contract signings never go without a hitch. Melissa continues to entertain and these two teams have been pretty hands off during this feud until now with The J Team wanting to show off their serious side now and give warning to NRC.

Doomsday Clock – Wondering if this is Aaron Reed, at first reading the title I thought it would be something from Amos Hess.

Omega vs Gryphon – I see why Gryphon was upset with Omega, because Omega was barely putting in any effort to wrestle the match. Magnum did his job by getting under Omega's skin to the point that he won't even wrestle his best friend. Good thing Gryphon called him out on it. The second half of the match was good with it being more competitive but Omega wasn't able to pick up the win, so Magnum did one helluva job picking his poison.

The Lion & The Mosquito – Zaid running in and delivering a low blow and quickly exiting the ring made me LMAO, talk about your hit & run. Then the incest line, pure comedy. It's hard to pinpoint who's the bigger douche Miller, Zaid, or Bishop.

Jailbreak Awaits – I like the build up between Phillips and Foster discussing the main event and Magnum stating how he does things because he feels like it.

Gauntlet Match – Sears was able to get through Knight who I'm sure is just disappointed Amos with his losses lately. Not able to get through Barry who is coming into his own now that Knight is in a slump.

The Secret – I'm really wondering what the secret is, if it's causing someone freaky like Onyx Jaden to go scurrying away. I hope it's a really good one.

Broken Mirror – I was happy with this one as I got to delve into another character trait of Dylan's and that is his built up anger. What happens to him when he needs to release his anger when he's not able to do it in the ring. I like that he got to do this with Valentino who's getting ready to get married while Dylan's relationship just ended a few weeks ago and Kyle really doesn't want any advice or see a happy couple in his face right now.

Target Acquired I really wanted this to be a cliffhanger segment with The Family and also seen this as a way to show off Mikaleh and Renzo's personalities with Renzo liking direct action and not so much a fan of the planning while Mikaleh is more of a tactician, likes to plan the suffering and beatings and show that he's the leader of the trio.

Foster vs Phillips – Why are people always interrupting good matches that I'm invested in reading, first Logan now Cavanah. WHY??? I liked the brawl between the two of them and then Foster got the win by knock out. Sure Foster isn't going to like it and gonna look to retaliate against him. Magnum on the other hand was like the grand slam winner of Onslaught with choosing Gryphon as Omega's opponent, Omega losing his match, and Magnum winning his match. Omega really has to find a way to gain some momentum walking into his match at Genocide.

King of the Moutain – All the beatings that's been going around in PCW lately lol. Kaiser is such an ass but he always has a tendency to lose his shit whenever he loses a championship belt just like when he lost the International title. Looks like Foster will have a major handicap walking into his match with Cavanah.

Great well balanced out show with the comedy vs the seriousness of the feuds that's going on. Good job everyone.

[KaiserGlider]

And here.... we.... go.

Pick Your Poison: Two huge Pay-Per-View quality matches announced for this episode, and I cannot fucking wait to read them both. PCW baby! And nobody predicted that Magnum would pick Gryphon to be Omega's opponent! Suck it guys!

13: HardcoreLegend pitched the idea of us doing something on this show to play up the fact that this is the unlucky 13th episode of Onslaught. I considered booking something where a heel is trying to avoid a babyface he's feuding with because he's superstitious. But I didn't want to make one of the heels look week, so I did it with Master and Sato instead, because they're joke characters and have nothing to lose. Another fun segment here; Sato giving the Master good-luck items to help him in his match. Not sure if that will help. I let SKS write this segment, cause why the fuck not. He's a MASTERMARK.

Ace's Psycho Analysis Segments: Here's the backstory of how this came about. Ace PM'ed me wanting to expand Ace's character and do something to flesh him out. (I always appreciate that btw, feel free to PM me whenever you want). So Ace has this idea of having Ace (the character) get evaluated by a doctor, who tells Ace that he has D.I.D. I was interested to see the emergence of this "NPT" character. He wouldn't tell us what NPT stood for, so it will be interesting to see that explained somewhere down the road. The writing here was good for sure. The original segment Ace sent me was in my opinion, too long, so I suggested that we split it up into Parts One and Two that would happen at different times throughout the show. There will be more eyeballs on Ace and N.P.T from now on, that's for sure.

Evans vs. Bishop: Alrighty then, first match of the night. Here we go. I'm not sure why but "as he bobs his way down the aisle" while singing his theme had me chuckling. Explosive start to this match, which suits Evan's character quite well. I liked the commentators playing up the fact that this is Shane's first match in a long time, and the spot where Evans was unable to lift the 275 pound Bishop and suplex him into the ring. Don't know about Bishop being 275 pounds of all muscle, seems to me he's more like 270 pounds of muscle and 5 pounds of ego! Er... sorry, bad joke. Anyway. is the Galaxy Slam the Black Hole Slam? Seems like it is; sweet if that's true. Interesting tribute to Rage Mishima with that Orochi Revolver. Really solid match here, I'm almost disappointed that it ended the way it did, even though I booked it that way! haha. KENDO STICK TIME! Evans sure went to town on Bishop and I know I marked out for it.

Daredevil's Due: I'm assuming Reece had some kind of device attached to his head that allowed him to be heard over the PA system without using a mic. Good promo here that highlighted Reece's personality. Btw I believe Kaiser Cavanah was the first to use "bitch-up" (via guest commentary during the Golden Gauntlet), just putting that out there to stroke my ego Looking forward to Reece/Cryin' Orion at Genocide for sure.

Rose Rejected: Interesting twist from the booking mind of Daz. PCW management trying to protect their investment. I'm not sure if this segment would have worked better with Burke being there instead of Hypeman after all. At the end of the day the point came across, so it works.

Sealing the Deal HardcoreLegend suggested the idea of the first ever PCW wedding. It hasn't been that long since Gia and Johnny V had problems, but this is professional wrestling so what the hell. The story here is that Johnny V is on a huge roll and he's super happy and so they're gonna get married. And I have a feeling Zaid won't be invited. Loved the bottle of champagne bit.

Menace To Society: Reference to one of Evan's signature moves in the title there, the Menace to Society DDT that has scrambled Cavanah's head on more than one merry occasion. Strong words between these two. No surprise that Andrew's line about how Evans "freaking lost it" set him off. Nothing like a good 'ole backstage brawl!

Dylan Kyle vs. Zanetti Family: Aw yeah. Been looking forward to seeing the Zanetti Family in action, so I'm pumped for this one. Nice to see the FAT MAN reprise his role from the promos, haha. Great entrance by the Zanettis! "He had two pistols in his holsters know as the Brothers Comeau and left them backstage, which I really can't blame him, 'cause they probably would have jammed." sweet line. I realize I made a mistake in putting the "red bell" image earlier in the match than it should have been. That explains why I was initially confused when Mikaleh used the belt and there was no DQ.

As in the "Target Acquired" segment later on, I like how Mikaleh is played up as the leader of the family while Renzo is the underboss who tends to be more reckless. Characterization like that helps when its a tag team and you have to know both characters. Hey, a mention of the Grinch! Nice. Falcon punch!

I have mixed thoughts on the finish. On one hand, Roxanne was able to come off as an evil bitch, and Dylan getting distracted when she said "I love you" shows that he still cares for her and their breakup has affected him negatively. On the other hand, I think the Zanetti Family should be able to win a 2-on-1 Handicap Match without needing a distraction from Roxanne. Dylan can still look good in putting up a lionhearted fight, but in the end the odds should be too much for him to overcome and he should take a clean loss to the tag team. That's just my opinion though. The Zanettis are still badass and this was a pretty good match; really enjoyed their debut. Comeaus vs. Zanettis should be a blast. Boy, Ali didn't get to write much on this show did he?

Rolling in Style: I pitched an idea to PhenomRocks about Drake Bernard hiring a bodyguard to help him win matches, just so he has something to separate him from other midcard heels. He then suggested that Bernard hires a manager because he thought that would work better than a bodyguard. I agreed, and we came up with Dan Morrison coming back to manage Bernard. I hope it works out for the best. I would probably agree with the other guys that "mcfaggots" was a bit unnecessary, if only because I know ShaneOfan hates the F word.

The Master vs Spencer Miller: I think in the description I wrote something like "Master comes down to the ring carrying his good-luck items" but I probably should have changed it to "Master is already in the ring" just to play the jobberness up more . I was surprised when Master kicked out of the Mill Shot Kill Shot, but then I went back and realized that Miller broke up the count, haha. Ah and there's the debut of the Koji Clutch. SKS told me that was going to be added to Miller's moveset. Good way to end the match.

War of Attrition: Sorry but I changed the name of this segment so that the announcement of the I Quit Match could be more of a surprise for certain people. Hope y'all don't mind. "Take my money!", Brett? Sure, I'll take your money. I'm really loving the characterization of Daz here. Spencer Miller has taken him to a place he's never been before, in addition to his losses at Escalation and Oblivion, and now Hypeman telling him he's not allowed in the building, it's all having an effect on Daz. Good promo by Daz setting up a colossal match at Genocide. Miller/Daz II, I Quit Match!

Gunning For the Gold: ShaneOfan wanted something simple for these guys this week, so here's a contract signing segment. LOL, so many good jabs at Melissa Chambers here. Good back-and-forth segment guys. J Team looking strong by laying out the tag team champions, will the same happen at Genocide?

Doomsday Clock: Tick tock. He's a 'comin!

Omega vs. Gryphon Richard: Another match I was looking forward to reading on this show. Fist off I'm a big fan of the "I want it all, I want it now!" thing that begins Gryphon's entrance. Stuff like that always makes people stand out so I'm all for it. Great start with Omega not having his usual intensity. "Magnum broke Omega and he didn’t have to double-team him through a table to do so." Another good commentary line there. Goddamn, Gryphon calling Omega a bitch! That's gotta light a fire under the Buffalo's ass. And yup, we're switching to another gear in this match-up now. Really good finish, countering the Lone-Wolf Bite into the Evisceration.

The Lion & and Mosquito: HFX mentioned that the feud between Gryphon and Zaid is like a fight between a lion and a mosquito, so there's my segment title. Zaid is great. lol. Some really good lines in his promos, as always. Only criticism I have is that last big paragraph in Zaid's promo could have been split into two paragraphs because it was a bit long. Looking forward to this match at Genocide and how Gryphon and Zaid will deal with each other.

Jailbreak Awaits: Hell of a promo by Nick. We'll see if he still thinks he's going to hurt Cavanah after the end of this show... hehehehe. Magnum making the statement that he's going to knock Foster's ass out. Oooh! Champion vs. Champion baby! By the way, holy fuck Keith Hypeman has been all over this show. Damn!

Gauntlet Match: Sears wanting to end the first match quickly made for some good storytelling. Big fan of Sear's running knee strike finisher. Loved Barry tossing away the kneepad at the start of the second match, that was perfect. I hope Barry (and Hess) yell "repent!" every time they have somebody in a submission hold, like Chris Jericho's "ASK HIM!" Great spot with Sears hitting the Love Hurts out of nowhere, but unable to put Barry away with it because he didn't have the kneepad. Really good match here, very well-written. I'm really impressed with BSM's writing abilities.

Btw, saucernips has been inactive lately. BSM covered the Sears vs. Disciples Gauntlet match for him this week, and he wrote Sears vs. Knight on Onslaught 12 as well. It would really suck if saucernips disappeared because this Sears/Hess story has a ton of potential.

The Secret: Yeah, we're going for the slow-burn on this storyline and having the match at Genocide be more about "the secret". Hess delivers a good promo as always. One thing I would have liked to see is some members of the crowd expressing their displeasure when Hess says he won't reveal the secret to them yet. Sears is the good guy, but I would think that even his supporters must be curious to find out what the secret is, and wouldn't appreciate Hess denying them that knowledge.

Broken Mirror: Nice reference to the title of the segment at the start. The descriptions of Dylan at the beginning were very well done, you can see the recent events of his life taking a toll on him mentally and a darkness growing in his mind. The way Johnny V delivered his lines was perfect. He's truly happy but you know it's rubbing Dylan the wrong way. The pat on the (sore) back was a great touch, as was Dylan getting tense. "They soon part ways before anything goes down however" was an interesting line that makes you wonder what could have possibly gone down if tensions ran a little higher. I'm very happy with this segment. Good job guys.

Target Acquired: (I read this before the Handicap Match btw). Nice segment here. I'm digging the Zanetti Family a lot - the manila folder and the black-and-white photographs of their victims really set the tone for how dangerous these guys are. Also a nice callback to their vignettes before they debuted. From Mikaleh telling Renzo to back off and sit down and being the voice of reason here, I'm, assuming he's the leader of the group/family. It's nice to see that get established. I get the feeling that Renzo is the one who just wants to fuck people up, while Mikaleh is the calm and calculating one that knows when to pick his spots.

Foster vs. Magnum: There's been a lot of matches on this show I have looked forward to reading, but this one should be straight-up awesome. LET'S GET PHYSICAL, PHYSICAL! I loved the exchange of punches where both men were smiling and then Foster gained the upper hand. Then Foster firing himself and the crowd up, ready to hit the big suicide dive, only to have Magnum go for the steel chair. That bastard Cavanah, knocking Foster out with the brass knuckles. This is a big win for Magnum - he now gets to say that he beat the so-called "real" PCW champion, so the Lone Star Champion is the true champion. Good job guys, I bet both of you were looking forward to writing this match, and I couldn't wait to get the opportunity to book it.

King of the Mountain: I wanted to keep Kaiser Cavanah's presence on this show to a minimum because he had a lot of segments on the last show, and I've been concentrating on my segment for the next Onslaught... Foster now has a bad leg heading into Jailbreak, and you gotta figure that's going to factor into the story of the match.

Awesome show everyone! Possibly the best Onslaught since Episode 10 at least. I like to think of Genocide as Resurgence on steroids.

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Not so sure what to think of this Ace bit, it's starting to take itself a bit too seriously for me, and I'm not a fond of these overdone "tortured past" stories. A little bit soap opera-y for my tastes, but we'll see what comes of it.

Quite a few good matches on the card for this show, Evans/Bishop being one of them. This must have been fun for Brett, getting to use the intensity of Evans and the silliness of Bishop together in the same match. Evans certainly seems to have a bit more aggression to him in the past, which is good for the character I think. And Bishop comes across as such a dick in this match, with all his showboating and telling Evans to retire great stuff, but yeah, too bad we couldn't get a victor. Actually works out in Orion's favor I think, because he didn't get pinned by Evans, and this adds some nice progression to the Logan/Evans story.

"Cryin' Orion" good stuff. I like Reece, but I'm looking forward to seeing him do more talking with his actions. He hasn't gotten a whole lot of opportunities to really show off in the ring yet, so I think that'll be the most intriguing part of their match at Genocide.

Lmao @ PCW having Keith Hypeman being the one tasked with barring Daz from the building... that was failed from the get go . Kind of a cool segment to sell Daz as being way in over his head, not sure I can remember a segment like that ever being done in WWE.

Oh fuck yes, a sim fed wedding, this one's gonna be the best since JLO/PPD I really hope this happens at Genocide and somehow gets interrupted by the next guy Johnny's feuding with, that would be fantastic.

The Menace to Society segment is I think some of my own personal best writing in a segment since PCW began, so I hope you guys dug it too

Kyle v. Zanettis... for some reason I thought I remembered the Comeaus being added to this? Maybe I just misread that segment last week. The match made Dylan look pretty tough and emphasized his perseverance and heart, but at what cost to the Zanettis? The fact that they needed a distraction by Roxanne to win a handicap match doesn't exactly do a whole lot for the characters, especially when we know so little about them. It does make Roxanne an even more effective heel, but I feel like right now the Zanettis need more building up than Roxanne does. Looking forward to more Comeau involvement in this one.

"Peckerhead McFaggots?" Where does Bernard come up with this shit? Oh fuck, Dan Morrison?! I'd totally forgotten about him. That definitely adds some intrigue to the Bernard return for sure. Morrison has already managed

Really confused about where all this Ace stuff is going, but it would seem that there's some kind of gimmick change on the way now for Ace... er... NPT? We'll see what happens there.

This is all I've got time to read right now, I'll add the rest of my thoughts later -- hopefully I get a chance to read the rest before I go out of town in a few days!

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Liked the two picks for opponents for Magnum and Omega. I think the Gryphon/Omega match will be a great preview to a feud that i believe we'll see sometime this year. And Tim and Nick writing the main even should be awesome.

Another hillarious Master/Sato segment. And good to see Ace getting some much needed therapy. Ace(the poster) has done a great job devloping this character so far. When he was first introduced, I thought the "daddy issues" thing that was hinted at would be cliche, but hes done a hreat job so far. Interested in learning more.

I like how the line continues to blur between Andrew being good or bad. Was he helping Shane by taking away the chair, or was he planning on hitting him with it? I still think that Andrew actually being a changed man would be the more interesting path, but lets wait and see what happens.

I want that PCW video game NOW!

NOOO GIA WAS MINE JOHNNY MINE Cant wait for the wedding though. Like Bret said, a wrestling wedding doesnt go by uniterrupted.

The Zanetti Family is great. Ive liked them since the promo videos. I expect them to beat the Comeaus in their match and eventually move on to competing for the tag team gold.

Even though it was a short match, its cool to see Miller introduce a new move. Adds another element to Miller/Daz 2.

I liked Gryphons mid match promo, firing up Omega. Im suprised Gryphon got the win, instead of a no contest. But it was a huge win for him even though Zaid killed whatever momentum the match may have gave him

I didnt put up comments on last weeks show, but I am definatley hyped up for jailbreak. If anyone can pull off such a crazy concept, its you two.

Loved Amos telling Onyx the secret before anyone else. I wonder if Onyx spills it to us before Amos.

Like Kaiser said, the lack of Cavanah being on this show really amped up his interferance in the Main Event, and the post match stuff. That was brutal. Beating the hell out of an unconcious Foster. That injured leg will definatley play a part in the Jailbreak match. Great ending.

Great show all around! One of our best imo. Strong matches and strong segments up and down the card. Lets keep it going

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Pick Your Poison – I really liked the pick of each opponent and think it will make for an interesting night ahead. My only confusion would be that Magnum Phillips didn’t sound nearly as Texan as he usually does. He actually seemed quite out of character.

13 – The friendship of Sato and the Master is a pretty good one and this segment was really humorous. I’ll like to see what he does with all those objects later on tonight.

Ace Psycho Analysis – Not exactly sure what to think of this segment. Obviously it will set up further events, but right now it was just kind of there. It’s also some tricky subject matter to make entertaining, tie to the story and not make everything feel too heavy.

Evans vs Bishop – Really liked the start of the match with Evans using his straight-forward attacking style and Bishop trying to outsmart him with choosing his spots. There were some awesome spots in the middle of this match as both men tried to find control. I loved the back body drop on the apron and the blunt force trauma from Evans. The finish with Logan coming down was interesting, but a little disappointing, would have loved to see this match come to a conclusion.

Daredevil’s Due – I hope you guys enjoy this one. I had a lot of fun writing it and feel like I’m starting to find my groove with Reece.

Rose Rejected – Interesting segment here with Daz getting barred from ringside. I wouldn’t have pegged him as a guy this would happen to, but it was a nice touch.

Sealing the Deal – Well the first PCW engagement was a touching moment to watch unfold. I wonder if it will follow the wrestling tradition of the wedding not going so well.

Menace to Society – Fantastic promo. Evans vs Logan has turned into my favorite and most anticipated mid-card match up of Genocide. The talk between each other was perfect and the time they broke into a brawl was perfect as well. Perhaps my favorite promo of the night.

Zanettis vs Kyle – Really good story told here with Dylan Kyle refusing to give in. Did a great job of getting him over even more. Meanwhile the Zanettis did a fantastic job of getting over as unrelenting bullies and all around bad dudes.

Rolling in Style – Dan Morrison is back? Nice and a new pairing with Drake Bernard would be fantastic.

Ace’s Psycho Analysis – Really well written piece that is definitely uncomfortable. I’m curious to see where this story is about to go now.

Master vs Miller – Quick match that certainly highlights Miller’s viciousness. I’m not sure I like this version of Miller still. There’s a lot of vicious heels, I kind of liked the cocky and arrogant Miller more, but we’ll see what happens in time.

War of Attrition – What a show-stopping brawl. I love what this feud is bringing out in Daz. That was great. To see the security guards work on behalf of Miller was a real surprise.

Gunning for the Gold – Nice contract signing. We all know where a segment like this is going to end up, but I like how the J Team and NRC blend together. There’s a nice contrast that creates a little bit of natural heat, allowing the feud to seem more organic.

Doomsday Clock – Fairly interesting promo, this “DOOM” character reminds me of guys like Oblivion from the old days. There’s certainly a place for a character or two like this in every company, even if their story possibilities are a little limited, they can do things no one else can.

Omega vs Richard – Nice psychology to the start of the match with it looking like Magnum is in Omega’s head a little. Also, really liked the speech by Gryphon in the middle of the match. I thought the finish was really well done and the decision to have Gryphon wind up winning after his early success was a good one.

Lion and Mosquito – Nice little promo from that jerk Zaid. He plays his role really well.

Jailbreak Awaits – Good promo with a few different layers here with Foster starting off with a good build to the title match and then Magnum making sure no one forgets about him. Nice job guys.

Gauntlet Match – The first match was a little awkward to me. It just went from Knight in control to Sears not doing much damage before getting the win. Would have liked to see this match laid out a little differently. Second match was much better and came to a logical end with Barry catching Sears off guard and getting the win. Nice work overall with these.

Secret – Nice delay tactic and the reaction of Onyx was really well done. Hopefully we will all find out the truth at Genocide.

Broken Mirror – I have to say that I don’t really see the point of this segment. Not much happens and no stories really advanced at all. It should have been a little more elaborate if it was going to be on the show. Maybe Kyle and Johnny will face off next week.

Target Acquired – I really am starting to dig the Zanetti family. They are nicely calculated and distinctly different from anybody else in PCW right now which is fantastic. They also are doing a good job of making themselves different from the Mafia.

Foster vs Phillips – I like the strategy of having the brawler Phillips get the champion on his heels from the outset. It’s a good approach. Really good main event that I enjoyed thoroughly. Then the finish, nice to see Kaiser come out and surprise Foster to further the tension. Magnum comes out looking really strong, Kaiser comes out looking smart and Foster looks relentless even in defeat. I liked it all.

King of the Mountain – Brutal assault by Kaiser to close the show. Their title re-match should be fantastic.

[Everlong]

Unfortunately I'm only going to be able to skim over most of the rest of the stuff I haven't read yet, because I'm really pressed for time and I'm leaving to go out of town for a week tomorrow. But I figured I'd at least get a couple more thoughts in on other stuff:

Miller vs. The Master, I think we all know how this one is going to turn out, haha. The whole "I'm not going to pin you yet just to prove a point" sthick... always effective. I'm still wondering what Evelyn's use is in this story, as so far she seems to be little more than a prop for Daz.

Daz is gonna be in some serious legal trouble for assaulting all these guards Genocide is shaping up to have quite an array of gimmick matches... a Jailbreak match, an I Quit match, a No Holds Barred match... yowza!

I hope that @saucernips is still around, it'd be a shame to see all the momentum from this Sears story just evaporate.

This Doom promo was interesting... is this Aaron Reed, or a different signup? We'll find out.

Interesting choice to pair dylan and Johnny together in a segment, as they're both at very opposite points in their lives. After seeing this, it'd almost be a cool idea to see Dylan turn heel as a result of all his issues with Roxanne and go after Johnny out of jealousy. That could make for a cool storyline.

I'm just going to have to presume Nick did a great job with the rest of our match, I'm not going to have the time to read it in full for at least another week or so.

Sorry I couldn't comment on the rest of this stuff in as much detail as I usually do (or even on all of it) -- but I'm pretty pumped for Genocide! Bring on the next show.

[Daz]

Onslaught 13

Pick Your Poison – Liked the attention paid to Magnum and Omega’s feud as it’s highlighted in the opening segment. One thing I like about PCW is how this sort of thing rotates around the roster, making differing feuds seem important. Pick your Poison is a solid little gimmick that should provide two different sorts of matches. Foster vs. Magnum is a very solid choice and should be hard hitting as anything. Omega vs. Gryphon plays nicely off their differences and is the perfect asshole choice for Mangum to make. Both solid little promos making for one fun opening segment.

13 – The Master is a lunatic and I love it. Continued comedy gold between him and Saito. These segments can never get enough love from me.

Ace’s Psycho Analysis, Part 1 – Dr. Sanus lol. I’d like to know where he got his credentials from. These probably went on a little too long, but it was certainly good nevertheless. The diagnosis was fairly amusing, and it’s all a good follow up to last show’s episode with Valentino. I’m not sure I liked the ending, with the usual “dark tormented past” being teased as it relates to Ace’s father. What I liked about Ace following his debut was the fact that cliché was somewhat spun on its head as he’d go into those trances, and come out a little goofier on the other side. I don’t necessarily want to lose that. We’ll see where this goes…

Shane Evans vs. Orion Bishop – Another good follow up to Onslaught 12. Loved the hot opening with Evans going right for Bishop following Orion’s attack on the last show. Nice commentary line alluding to the fact Evans has been out of the ring for some time now. Solid back and forth on the apron with the Suplex attempts. Good work on the back and torso of Evans following the Back Drop on the apron. O’CONNOR ROLL~! Evans bringing out the big guns, using Rage Mishima’s Orochi Revolver. I like that Evans is having to resort to new things, as it makes Bishop seem more like a threat. Also, given the Mafia history with Mishima, it’s a nice nod to past continuity. The finish works nicely in setting up the Logan/Evans feud, and adding more fuel to the ambiguity fire, of whether Logan simply reacted trying to do the right thing, or intentionally worked the situation to get Evans disqualified. Really, really good match, solid finish and storytelling. Good stuff all around.

Daredevil’s Due – Reece’s return, targeting Bishop after their differences was nicely done. Nice and simple little promo that accomplished exactly what it needed to, hitting all the right beats.

Rose Rejected – At some point, Hypeman is gonna need to be slapped about a little. Originally, I’d planned to have Burke deliver the news in person, but because he’s been so heavily involved in the Kaiser/Foster stuff, we thought it best to leave him out of this storyline for now. I actually think it comes off better if it’s a stooge, as to Daz, it’s as if he’s not been treated with the proper respect, which sends him spiralling further into the dark place. Again, what I like about this story is the longer it goes, the worse Daz becomes, and the smugger Miller gets.

Sealing the Deal – I liked how nervous Johnny V was portrayed here, and some of the commentary lines were really good. Alex getting the chance to be more girly than usual amuses me for some reason. In all my years of simming, I don’t think I’ve seen an engagement. I’ve seen Matt Sears give Onyx Jaden a Lungblower in GSW back in 2006, but that’s about the closest thing. Something tells me this will go about as smoothly as their story so far.

Menace to Society – What I like about Logan in this segment is how justified he is in his anger. But at the same time, he’s still extremely unlikeable in the way he says everything, which is a testament to the subtlety of the writing. The lines between heel and face were masterfully blurred as Evans continued to prod Logan, and Logan prodded back just as hard. The scuffle at the end was an ideal taste of what’s to come. Looking forward to it. With Foster/Kaiser II, Miller/Daz II, Evans/Logan, Magnum/Omega, Gryphon/Zaid presumably, NRC/J-Team and Reece/Bishop, Genocide is shaping up to be a really good little show.

Dylan Kyle vs. The Zanetti Family – I predict this ends badly for Dylan Kyle. Good start with Roxanne providing the distraction, allowing her family to attack Kyle and slow his momentum. Great focus on the injuries over the past two shows. In terms of characterization, I think you’ve done a really good job of establishing the Zanetti Family in a short amount of time. They’re silent, and extremely deadly. I almost hope you don’t have them speak for a long time. Another nice touch with Roxanne, as she appears worried as Dylan prepares for his comeback. Having been associated with him for so long, of course she’d be worried. Great finish with Roxanne professing love to garner Dylan’s attention. Dylan showed fire and put up a fight, but the Zanetti family overwhelmed him, which is exactly what this should have been. The post-match attack and the Comeau’s making the save played off last show’s segment worked nicely, punctuating the segment nicely

My only minor quibble is perhaps the writing was a little too flowery. You know what I mean? Things like “an illustrious amount of boos” and “enraptured” this and that. It’s over reaching a little I think, trying a little too hard. You’re good enough to strip it back and let the emotion and drama you’re creating breath and speak for itself. You don’t need to hammer it in so hard. Don’t get me wrong, I think it’s good as is, but I think it can be a step above and more impactful if you eliminate some (not all) of the “pretty prose”. Again though, it’s an extremely minor quibble.

Rolling in Style – Bernard bringing in Dan Morrison! Morrison hasn’t been seen since Maverick’s feud with Daz back in the good old days. Great promo by Bernard, with the usual eloquent calibre of swearing.

Ace’s Psycho Analysis, Part 2 – This seems to be the evolution of Ace. Honestly I’m not sure where things go from here.

The Master vs. Spencer Miller – Last show, Miller had The Master do his dirty work. This show, Miler’s gonna kill him. Miller just gives no fucks and massacred the Master here. Was exactly what it needed to be, and it looks as if the Master and Sato’s good luck charms did the Master no favours. Loved the tease with Miller telling the Master it won’t be over until he quits. Miller is hell bent on ending Daz’s career and this was good foreshadowing of that.

War of Attrition – Daz just doesn’t like people. That’s what this is about. I based this segment on something that happened between Ex and Daz during their feud. Also there’s a subtle tension between Evelyn and Daz, which I hope comes off as a little uneasy, with him not letting her express how she feels etc. I Quit, Daz vs. Miller, should be fun.

Gunning for Gold – Fun little segment where NRC and the J-Team got to trade some verbal shots. I’ve always liked writing the Tag Team stuff with T.C and now NRC because I get to be funny. It’s good when there’s an opponent who can do the same, and the J-Team fit the bill. This feud has been fairly relaxed, not a great deal of interaction, which I like. There’s a lot of things to play with when they finally have the tag team title match, and room beyond that to continue the feud. Looking forward to Genocide. Polyester Princesses was a good line, and I particularly liked the insinuation that Melissa Chambers couldn’t cut it as a prostitute. Is the Mid-West known for their high scale hookers?

Doomsday Clock – Doom is coming. I was always a fan of this dude back in SOS, as part of Apocalypse. Tag Team champion pretty much wherever he wrote, and was turning into a solid singles character before SOS fell by the wayside. Interested in seeing what he brings to the table as part of PCW.

Omega vs. Richard – Nice tense handshake between mentor and protégée before this started. I like it. Liked the opening exchanges with Omega tagging Gryphon with kicks, not wanting to get involved in a test of strength. Gryphon’s been portrayed as freakishly strong, Omega, as his mentor knows that, and wouldn’t want to get suckered into it. Smart writing. I liked the contrast between the two. Gryphon sees this an opportunity to show his mentor how good and proficient he is, but Omega wants nothing to do with it, and is reluctant to take the fight to his student. Made for an interesting dynamic. Lived the Gryphon promo mid-match and how it fired Omega up. The finish was great, as Gryphon made the last ditch counter and delivered the Backbreaker. Great nod to the psychology of the thing as Richard needed to crawl into the cover after using his injured knee to deliver the move. Really solid matchup.

The Lion and the Mosquito – Zaid being Zaid, throwing some nice little digs the fans way. I like that we’re giving the shows locations as it leads to fun little stuff like this. I’m not sure why anybody would want to ice off their balls, but I’ll let it slide.

Jailbreak Awaits – Nice promo from Foster, putting the pressure on Kaiser. Everything Nick’s been doing since PCW started has been spot on really, and I can’t find fault with this. Magnum’s interruption helps set the stage for the showdown between him and Foster later on. It also perhaps sets the stage for a future title match between the two. I know I wouldn’t be opposed to that.

Sears vs. The Disciples Gauntlet – Similar match between Sears and Knight as before. Just solid stuff all-around. The Barry portion of the match is what I was looking forward to. I wanted to see how Brother Theodore took advantage of a weakened Sears and how Matt responded. Having Barry get the loaded knee pad of Matt Sears removed was a genius little interlude. “He can do whatever he wants. He has God on his side” is a golden commentary line. Great psychology at the end, as Sears knee strike sans kneepad, wasn’t effective enough to put Barry away. Good use of the exposed buckle and the Call of the Wild ends it. I really liked the way this one panned out.

The Secret – I adore Amos Hess, have I mentioned that recently? The walls protecting the secret and relating it to Jericho is just a genius way to bring the gimmick into play. Hess telling Onyx the secret is just so slimey and continues to tease the reveal, which has been handled very well thus far. Another really simple and effective promo from Hess. This feud is simmering nicely, and hopefully saucernips will be able to return for the pinnacle of it so things can really heat up.

Broken Mirror – I can’t say I was much a fan of the opening of this segment. The broken mirror deal is more of an Ace gimmick I think, and Dylan is a more grounded character, so there was a weird juxtaposition. The follow up however, was far more effective, with Johnny offering his sympathies to Dylan, whilst also rubbing his own happiness with Gia in Dylan’s face. It’s more relatable and did far more for the character than the first section of the segment, in my opinion.

Target Acquired – I like the way the Zanetti Family has been spun off from Dylan Kyle to the Brother’s Comeau. The Xbox Joke was perhaps a little misplaced and seemed at odds with the Zanetti Family’s more serious nature. Again, I think I’d have preferred to see the Zanetti’s be kept as the strong silent types but that’s more a personal preference than a criticism of the execution.

Nick Foster vs. Magnum Phillips – Loved Foster trying to out wrestle and out strike Magnum in the early going, only to get caught with the big power move that slows him down. Foster’s resilience was on full display and I like as the match went on longer, Foster began to gain more and more control, as if Magnum was suddenly the underdog. It was a cool switch to see Magnum portrayed as being on the back foot, as it’s not something that’s been done very often. And of course it makes perfect sense that it happens against someone like Foster, who is after all the World Champion. It led nicely into Magnum going for the steel chair, which isn’t something you’d necessarily expect from him, because he likes to do the damage with his own two hands … but it made sense given the psychology that was building within the match. The distraction and Kaiser’s interference was well executed, and even harkened back to Foster’s rivalry with Miller and all those chair shots he took, which I always appreciate. A huge win for Magnum and surely this puts him in the title hunt now.

King of the Mountain – Damn clever segment with Kaiser taking out the leg of Foster, ensuring he can’t climb the ladder in their title match at Genocide .This adds a whole new dynamic to that match and this rivalry. Can’t wait to see what happens.